Film Review

 Recently someone I know reviewed my project and gave me some suggestions. I emailed my project to a family friend who lived in another city. I did this so I know they will not be biased. When I sent them the film I also sent them the title and the pitch so they would have an idea as to what it was about. It took them a few days to get back to me and email me back. So, while I waited I put a few little touches on my projects. Once they did email me back their information was very helpful. They gave me a couple suggestions that would make my film better. The suggestions they gave me were about the lighting and some of the camera angles. He said a few scenes needed some better lighting. He said that in some of the shots where Luke was running to find a hiding spot the lighting often changed and it was an eye sore. He also said this about the shots where zane was running. I had a few ideas on how to fix this problem. So I told myself that I would go back and fix it. He also said a few shots could use some better camera angles. He said that the shots in the beginning weren’t very symmetrical and it looked odd. Once he pointed it out I could realize what he was talking about. In some of the shots in the beginning characters heads were often not in the middle and at some weird angle. I knew I had to fix this too. Overall, the film review was very helpful and it will make my project better.